1. Form
I was trying to capture a cloud as a form. Feedback was that there can be more shading to increase the feel of 3D-ness. I do agree and will be in search of a another nice cloud soon.
2. Shapes
I wanted to capture te repeated diamond shapes of the gate. But It feels more like portrayal of lines. I will be changing this for sure.
3. Colour
I captured a bee and was so proud of it. ut it end up that it is distracting. I love capturing insects for some strange reason, but I think it is hindering the colours of this photo. If only the bee is in bright yellow!
4. Lines
Lines of a leave. This was my favourite picture. My friends mentioned that the part under the shade is distracting. I will consult more people with regards to that.
5. Texture
This is a part of a tree's bark. It was mentioned during critique that the ends of the photos are quite distracting. But I feel personally that the sides of poppng out barks give a more holistic feeling of the texture. I shall consult more people.
I think I am going to reshoot for this assignment with my new D90! It is quite interesting to look at photos the rest have taken, some were really good!
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